Here Goes

[2cruise]

This is from one of the three weddings I was a second shooter this year.

The Ring by Clyde Cornett[/URL]

 

[DBG Studios]

Beautiful moment captured here!

The most MINOR critique I can offer: I don't know if this was cropped at all but if I could change ANYTHING, I'd probably move the crop so that the left edge is closer to the cab of the truck (?) allowing the viewer to "see" a little more of the woman's face.

I am a fan of shallow DoF as used here, but it does leave me wondering a bit more about the emotion seen in her eyes when this moment was captured!

 

[joayne]

I think you have a really great concept here..
I also think you refine it and make it really great..
It's all there!

 

[ElTigreBlanco]

I agree that the framing would be better to include more of the subjects but otherwise a great shot!

 

[K9Kirk]

There's something about her eye looking away from him that bothers me. Since you cant see his eyes maybe it would be best if you couldn't see hers either. Hard to say for sure without cropping and seeing it that way for myself. Aside from that, it's a very nice shot.

 

[Joedlh]

The red truck in the background is a destructive attention-getter. Try desaturating the red and toning down the highlights. Also, crop a bit off (on the left).

 

[West Coast Birder]

There's something about her eye looking away from him that bothers me. Since you cant see his eyes maybe it would be best if you couldn't see hers either. Hard to say for sure without cropping and seeing it that way for myself. Aside from that, it's a very nice shot.

Hmmm, I see the exact opposite. I see her staring into his eyes.

 

[West Coast Birder]

The red truck in the background is a destructive attention-getter. Try desaturating the red and toning down the highlights. Also, crop a bit off (on the left).

I think you are on to something here. I have always felt that selective saturation/desaturation/coloring is too gimmicky, but in this case, it might actually work really well.