Thanks, everyone, for your opinions. Let me give you the backstory for these edits.
A is the original shot after cropping.
B was processed with my usual workflow. The perch was darkened, background was darkened, the subject was enhanced by boosting the clarity and by brightening it. The head was brightened more.
As its maker, I was well pleased with the result, but then I started to notice a sheen in the body feathers, maybe looking a bit unnatural - the result of the enhancing. Having doubt, I consulted ChatGPT, which advised me that B "pops a bit more" and was "more striking" but that I might have "crossed a stylistic boundary". I didn't entirely disagree, so I went back to Lightroom and did C.
C I backed off on the clarity of the body. I also removed the distracting branch that Bob referred to. I think the result is OK, and ChatGPT gave it a strong endorsement.
Now, I have some experience with ChatGPT, and it is often quite wrong. It can sound very sage and convincing, and still be wrong. That is why I'm asking here.
From the comments in this thread, my version B wasn't far off! Thanks again, and any further reactions and comments are welcome.